ftk 发表于 2023-8-14 00:02   全显示 1楼
楼主的行文特点就是故事的逻辑比较合理，情节进展的也比较自然，没有那么多刻意的铺垫，先赞一个！只不过，年龄设定上只比中学生大十来岁，就算是高中也是不是太年轻了，写到这里，忽然想到，这么多故事过去，怎么特别想看一个四十一二岁的纯熟女版杨清越了呢？这一篇肯定不行了，以后考虑考虑？
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