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[修真仙侠] 【我被两位玄仙娘亲争夺的日常】第二章:药奶(双母、后宫)

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多写点恶堕肉吧。按照你之前的剧情,剧情上是没法让人满意了,不如直接让读者小头控制大头。我理解作者看绿文想疯狂报复的心态,但是说实话,不好写,这种直接杀了还是变成肉便器都属于没法处理,纯看笔力,如果作者能从剧情上处理好,我只能建议兄弟你去起点吧,白金之资,直接一书证道。
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